Birth of a Lullaby

I really like how you used only black and white to capture this moment. Edward looks really, really good, especially his face and his hair - the touseld, uncontroallble style he has- are perfectly drawn. I think you did a great job with the hands and his clothes. His facial expression is like it should be in the movie - i really like how he looks so deep in thought, but still in love with this human girl. And the piano looks incredibly good! You did a great job and I can't spot anything that I don't like! The most important thing is that, as a viewer, you can see and feel the emotions expressed in this picture. Very, very good! This moment is so important in the book and you did an amazing capture of it. The way he sits on the piano is also very well done - he looks like he's so in it. Keep on working, this is amazing! You also did a nice job with the shadows, even tough the light (if that is what it is), that shines trough the curtains, ends a little aprubtly. But as I said - overall it is absolutely beautiful!